Light Weight
From: EastOaklandCalifornia |
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graphex, im gonna rearange your face turnin you into a hexegon/
skill is driveing past you, busting ur body up like a car rapidly/...0/10 wheres da rhyme?
driveing you insanally crazy, makin you sniff ballz thinkin der daisys/
ii'll execute you, tear you body into little peices/...0/10 wtf..no rhymin
your new to rb, need to be thinkin about dis defeat quitting/
i'll come across breakin the floor benath you under your feet/0/10 man stop already
fuckin shoot you you with an m9 machine gun, like repeatedly doin in even though your dead/........lost me
make you look da colour red fuckin shoot your ass to mix the colour lol/
yea brown, the colour brown of shit, the smell is indescribable/2/10 sounds like a rhym
torch your ass to stop me feelin weezy, lookin like a japenese screamin like a 10 year old girl/ how many likes were there in da last sentance? no structure no rhymes some punches but they clearly missd man i dat was weak im not hatin but if you work on your structure and rhymes mixem up and u seem like u can do da damn thang practice please................
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