k, go ahead....

put your rules down, cuz you need to before we can start.

k, 10 lines, 1 post, no crew or hatin votes.......

graphex, im gonna rearange your face turnin you into a hexegon/
skill is driveing past you, busting ur body up like a car rapidly/
driveing you insanally crazy, makin you sniff ballz thinkin der daisys/
ii'll execute you, tear you body into little peices/
your new to rb, need to be thinkin about dis defeat quitting/
i'll come across breakin the floor benath you under your feet/
fuckin shoot you you with an m9 machine gun, like repeatedly doin in even though your dead/
make you look da colour red fuckin shoot your ass to mix the colour lol/
yea brown, the colour brown of shit, the smell is indescribable/
torch your ass to stop me feelin weezy, lookin like a japenese screamin like a 10 year old girl/

fine mind must mean he has a thin chance to win/
cause rappin against me is like strappin timebombs to ya chin/
this lyrical legend is tearin'N wreckin your queer attempt of steppin/
your avatar looks right, white cracka that couldnt spit hooks tight/
if you fished lines off shug knight/
its not that hes ill tho, its just fine minds skills so simple minded/
you could rewind this before my rhymes hit and its still decide/
im the victor, you could start a six on the rickter and you still couldn't shake this win if you was a grifter/
they call me Mr.G its no mystery cause i burn till i crisp emcee's/
its judgment day and the one to stay is graphex with the puns to slay/

Yo Vote On This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

battles wasnothing special..nothing stood out
from neither which makes it hard to vote
but graphex gets the vote cos hes rhymed better
and he had better vocab

pz

Graphex
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

LyRiCaL D.
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

v/ LyRiCaL D.

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i have to give this to Lyrical D because I feel even tho I didn't rhyme
that well it had better punches, flow everything Graphex I feel you
could drop better than this, so my vote obviously goes to:
Lyrical D, Fine Mind w/e your name is now

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I have to give this one to graph becuase he had better flow in his lyrics and his rhymes where better. and to top it all off his closure finished it all up well. so my vote goes to graphix
and oh yea plz hit up on this battle thnx
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127734

both were weak lyrical didnt rhyme for nuttin and graphix nuttinn to special but decent i guess
v/graphix

graphex, im gonna rearange your face turnin you into a hexegon/
skill is driveing past you, busting ur body up like a car rapidly/...0/10 wheres da rhyme?
driveing you insanally crazy, makin you sniff ballz thinkin der daisys/
ii'll execute you, tear you body into little peices/...0/10 wtf..no rhymin
your new to rb, need to be thinkin about dis defeat quitting/
i'll come across breakin the floor benath you under your feet/0/10 man stop already
fuckin shoot you you with an m9 machine gun, like repeatedly doin in even though your dead/........lost me
make you look da colour red fuckin shoot your ass to mix the colour lol/
yea brown, the colour brown of shit, the smell is indescribable/2/10 sounds like a rhym
torch your ass to stop me feelin weezy, lookin like a japenese screamin like a 10 year old girl/ how many likes were there in da last sentance? no structure no rhymes some punches but they clearly missd man i dat was weak im not hatin but if you work on your structure and rhymes mixem up and u seem like u can do da damn thang practice please................

can you guys return a honest vote at one of my battles plse