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Old 06-29-04, 03:37 AM   #11
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A Reflection Of The Past
 
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From: inside your nightmare's
IP:

DR-ur structure was okay,so were ur punches they were decent,u flowed alright,,but ur verse was simple and basic wasn't really any wordplay or personals from what i read so u must elevate ive seen better..

LK-UR PUNCHES HIT HARD,UR FLOW WAS GOOD IN THIS,AND YOUR STRUCTURE WAS DECENT,YOU HAD GOOD WORDPLAY,AND THERE WERE PERSONALS EVERYWHERE..THE PERSONALS WERE MAD FUNNY LOL..HAD ME ROLLING,THIS WAS A ONE SIDED BATTLE FOR YOU,YOUR VERSE WAS NICE,GOOD SHIT

lattinkittin gets this with good personals,and harder hitting punches

v/LK
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