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No Hate Votes
No D/R < --- Definetly will be DQ'ED
No Feedin off ma VErse

iight Deadline: June : 28

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Free Agent

well i said i retired from battling,but since u want it wit me,i'll do this one last battle...but,imma be mad busy right up until wednesday...so we'll have to postpone the deadline to early next week at least...

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Look Check it


Yo Breakin her Face in her own place but still had to Phone her.....
Gurl made a New Thing and it is called Chick Boner....
now im the Elavated head in this Battle u aint got it....
Makein Shit So hott It Doesent even get to Kaotic....
Man my Flowz Punches are hott And IN-Spireing....
Yo im 1 of the Reasons That This Bitch Is Retireing....
Man I can't beleave its so easy u heard what i said....
Cause imma Kill This Bitch Makein a Early Under-Ground-Bed....
Well rememba dat i gotta spit first and its my Turn....
Spittin "hott' Shit gurlz like Usher Gotta Let it Burn....
MAn im in Control and shit u juss Whackk....
Maybe Repesenting California but u still play wit Sac....


UnderGround bed < ---- Grave
California "sacremento" < ---- Sac. Kings

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Free Agent

DEADLY RHYMES...the only thing ur name might tell/
is ur RHYMES are DEADLY...cuz they make me wanna KILL myself//
and ur crew...LYRICAL LEGENDS...that name's a deceiver/
ur crew's only LEGENDARY for making a 12 YR OLD THEIR LEADER//
why u even step to me...there must be a discrepancy/
ur rhymes are like the SCHOOL you're in...they both be ELEMENTARY//
aint even get started yet..get ready for the main brawl/
u say u're JORDAN of rap....maybe when he PLAYED BASEBALL//
its obvious i'm winnin this...he stays droppin lameness/
kid must be unemployed....cuz he dont even MAKE SENSE(CENTS)//
and this kid is reppin JERSEY,claims he from BRICK city/
ur verse is like DROPPING BRICKS...the entire thing is SHITTY//
dunno what u thought ur weak ass verse would really do/
truth is..he called me out cuz i refused to join his crew//

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can we get some votes in here ppl........c'mon now

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us waiver, waiver, us entry waiver, criminal record travel, denied entry us

wtf,they gotta find another way of voting on t his board.....not a single person has voted at all..............

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can we get some voters in here.......wtf..........

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this is why i quit battlin on this shit.......nobody is voting...damn

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us waiver, waiver, us entry waiver, criminal record travel, denied entry us

dR/ structure was decent, flow was okay...your punches if you had any were weak. you claim you were the elevated one but it didn't seem like it here...a bunch of filler lines. work on connecting your punches...it's like your swinging but you keep missing lol

Lk/ probably the most easiest battle I seen you face. decent punches, majority of them stuck..especially that line when said something about a 12 yr old being leader that was funny .nice personal. you dominated this in almost every category.....

v/lk....

to any of you'll place an honest vote on my battle in my sig....aight peace

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Blue Print

B.P.

Latin kitten got this one, no doubt. structur nice, flow, nice, never fell off

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Ya BiTch FA ShO!

DR-ur structure was okay,so were ur punches they were decent,u flowed alright,,but ur verse was simple and basic wasn't really any wordplay or personals from what i read so u must elevate ive seen better..

LK-UR PUNCHES HIT HARD,UR FLOW WAS GOOD IN THIS,AND YOUR STRUCTURE WAS DECENT,YOU HAD GOOD WORDPLAY,AND THERE WERE PERSONALS EVERYWHERE..THE PERSONALS WERE MAD FUNNY LOL..HAD ME ROLLING,THIS WAS A ONE SIDED BATTLE FOR YOU,YOUR VERSE WAS NICE,GOOD SHIT

lattinkittin gets this with good personals,and harder hitting punches

v/LK

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thanks for voting for those of u who did........can we get some more votes in here

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yo, LK got this easy

DR, you had a pretty decent verse. You had nice flwo but it went off in a few spots. it was decent overall. You r punches were alright, but none hit all that hard. It was a pretty good verse, but LK was too much for you.


LK, hot shit. you had some good pucnhes. Like that Jordan one. hot shit. your flow was awesome too. overall you had a very good verse. Very good job in it.

v/lk

just leavin feed back... cant vote, only 258 posts hehe.. i think LK got this one brah.. she had some good personals.. her punches hit harder to.. both had good flow... so if i could magically get 42 posts lol.. my vote would go to LK.. lets get more votes tho................UPPIN

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