lol...

aight break down...

winc:first bars are played... record disses about you being her first lost or sumthing is really really played... like half ur verse circled around her record.. :-/... not much creativity.. nice wordplay tho i liked that part about ur verse.. flow was off a lil.. structure was ok... overall 5/10

star: you strunture stood out.. was pretty good.. flow was ok.. punches were ok.. not many played lines, thats better.. over like a 6.5/10...nice drop..

over all i was feelin stars the most... big ups to both of you, and keep elavatin...

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