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Old 06-30-04, 09:37 AM   #12
QBsmasher
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Winc: Your structure was off a lil, but it didnt hurt your flow much.
Your punchlines were pretty syck.
I liked your personals: if you "the star" then you've "fallin'" like "alicia" in the "WiNC" of an eye/ <---That line was nice.
Maybe a lil more wordplay next time.

The Star: I thought your verse was pretty generic. You had good structure and flow, woulda sounded good on a mic.
Punchlines were very weak, I wasnt feelin em at all.
Wasnt seein any good personals.
Your wordplay however, was good.

v/ Winc