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Old 07-01-04, 12:21 PM   #22
Durmil
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 464
From: Wastalands
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Punches-Winc
Personals-*
Flow-who cares its text....but *
Opener-Tie...both were meh
Closer-*
Enjoyment-Winc...but like Hoops said ive seen a lot of ur conceptz b4
Overall-Star.......

WinC ur wordplay was cool im a fan of wordplay but some of ur lines coulda been worded better and like i said u had some played conceptz but ur verse was pretty tight
Star...ur personals were great u had better structure...and u had some wordplay in there 2

close battle...but star