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Old 07-01-04, 07:03 PM   #2
Terumoto
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Yo, ima put ten-to-ya-head, this dude cant contend-with-this-vet..
rookie's careers over, cos like amateur tightropers it depends-on-the-net..
fluid with all verses-that-i-pour, realised he wack now hes cursin-the-board..
dispursin-my-sword, cos this kid is shit on text and even worse-to-record..

im fly-when-spit, disguisin-my-hits, im gonna kill this try-hard-little-bitch..
no dick ridin votes cos the herb knows no-one will ride-on-his-dick..
im dyin-to-split this kid into two, cos all of ya verses-are-lame..
you flirtin-with-pain... this kids gettin finished worse-than-his-name..

dude, you hit-like-a-bitch.. no flow, no punches, spit the simplest-shit..
only reasone anybody voted for you is cos you fill your dimples-with-dicks..
ima finish-da-sixx, my punches so solid he cant even flip-back-my-hits..
youd think "spalding" labelled my cock the way guys keep "bouncin"-on-it..

im cryptic with all lines, try to dodge it, watch ya wiggle-n-jolt,-tyke..
This kid won a battle, and now he think hes hot.. ya sig is a joke-right?
watch as i rip him, he wont even try-it, ima keep-this-bitch-quiet..
happens a lot, its been days n 2 of my battles guys aint even-replied-yet..

aint felt a punch-that-you-thrown, crunchin-ya-dome, nuthins-gotta-be wacker..
the difference between us, im an emcee, and your just a wannabe-rapper..
its not-hard-to-see, all of your punches are appaulling-and-weak..
ill give you a tip to make your verses better: select-all-n-delete..

orright.. thats 10 bars.. your up dude

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