ayo u kno tha rules
no dikrydin
no hate n no crew votes
10 bars
u spit first
~1~

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Yo, ima put ten-to-ya-head, this dude cant contend-with-this-vet..
rookie's careers over, cos like amateur tightropers it depends-on-the-net..
fluid with all verses-that-i-pour, realised he wack now hes cursin-the-board..
dispursin-my-sword, cos this kid is shit on text and even worse-to-record..

im fly-when-spit, disguisin-my-hits, im gonna kill this try-hard-little-bitch..
no dick ridin votes cos the herb knows no-one will ride-on-his-dick..
im dyin-to-split this kid into two, cos all of ya verses-are-lame..
you flirtin-with-pain... this kids gettin finished worse-than-his-name..

dude, you hit-like-a-bitch.. no flow, no punches, spit the simplest-shit..
only reasone anybody voted for you is cos you fill your dimples-with-dicks..
ima finish-da-sixx, my punches so solid he cant even flip-back-my-hits..
youd think "spalding" labelled my cock the way guys keep "bouncin"-on-it..

im cryptic with all lines, try to dodge it, watch ya wiggle-n-jolt,-tyke..
This kid won a battle, and now he think hes hot.. ya sig is a joke-right?
watch as i rip him, he wont even try-it, ima keep-this-bitch-quiet..
happens a lot, its been days n 2 of my battles guys aint even-replied-yet..

aint felt a punch-that-you-thrown, crunchin-ya-dome, nuthins-gotta-be wacker..
the difference between us, im an emcee, and your just a wannabe-rapper..
its not-hard-to-see, all of your punches are appaulling-and-weak..
ill give you a tip to make your verses better: select-all-n-delete..

orright.. thats 10 bars.. your up dude

one

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sry i took so long... went to work...

1~sum1 git this kid a thesaurus cuz u repeatin ya punches/
ur rhymes git thrown away like portable lunches//
2~pussy the only way u git 'laid' is if i lay u owt/
cussin me off wen its online, but bitch watch ya mouf//
3~ur rhymes r simplistic but da-mysfit-is-dis-sick/
i dissed u cuz ya jus anotha one for tha stylistics//
4~be truthful, it aint 1 man writin ya lyrics, ya fony(fake)/
i call ma 9 "tha preacher", how it leaves cats 'holy'//
5~actually i got the end of my name cuz i leave cats 'finished'/
he got UN tatted on his ass, how he has all races in it//
6~wat kinda fool thinkin he want it wit SixX/
U'd be thinkin he beatin off, how im leavin him stiff//
7~cmon kid... dont make me send ya up wit ya loved ones/
n dont be mad at me that the second number went up 1//(win-loss record)
8~ya rap about me like ya kno me, dis one-man-bitchz a joke/
he only chose rappin cuz choir kicked him owt wen his voice broke//
9~yung'n ackin like he jus got his period, pms'in non-stop/
his momma gave him a pat on his back wen his balls dropped//
10~yall bitchiz duckin wen ya hear da heat pop/
den ma fist have u holdin ya mouf like u beat box//chea!

~1~

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uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

one

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hmm..

Finish:i liked the flow you had it was a nice lil flow... but you self glorified more than you threw punches, which is not the best idea to do in a battle.. great for cyphers and stuff, but doesent get the job done in battles..structured was hurting a lil bit, decent.

one:the multies are there in your verse and are working well for it.. flow was good... multies were there.. punches were on point.. really good good verse i thought... keep up the nice work..structure was nice..


v/one

return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132799

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

need more votes.......... bump......... cmon^^^^^^^^^^^6


one

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i hope that lil 6 at the end wasnt intended as me..... VOTE PEEPL... and jus so ya kno if u read my lines, almost ever bar is a punch.. not really ANY self-glorification in there...... but peepl keep voting

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lol.. nah nah... took off the shift too early so it went 6 instead of ^


but yeah.. we need votes...............

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uhm....aight battle...not the best i've seen but mine ain't no betta so...i guess i should shut it...but sixx wun this..all his shyt wuz betta..one man ur good...but i think u shoulda come harda fo this battle man...

vote=sixx

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

hes still in it ladies n gentlemen.... props to one-man-band... def nice n if it was up to me... well yea it aint so watever... neway props yung'n u came strong... wasnt expectin it....

BIG ASS BUMP^^^^THIS SHYTZ FALLIN OFF^^^^^^

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lol. well you definitely came harder than you do in the cyphers... wasnt really expecting much punch from ya verse.. guess i was wrong

uppin for votes

one

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Opener-One
Closer-SixX i liked the beat box thing havent seen that b4
Punches-One
Personals-One
Multi's-One...tied them in well
Overall-One

good battle tho...i just think he slighty up'd u in certain areas Sixx....great battle tho

and can u both hit up this battle of mine wit honest votes...thanx peace:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614

Bumpin Dis Shyt^^^^^ Need More Votes^^^^^^^^^

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One-man-band: Dayum the flow is syck, wordplay is tight. The opener was hard, about depending on the net I liked that. 10 bars worth of punches, damn I dont think anyone could survive that, shit was ILL. Lots of multis and metas in there, was really feelin it. Your closer was tight too, select all and delete, very original, I like your style.

Sixx da FinisH: Hell your structure and flow was on also, you lacked multis, and your wordplay wasnt as good as ones but your shit was on point too. Your punches were hittin hard, his were just hittin harder. Hes just 1 level ahead of you, but damn you write some tight shit too....both of yall are hard. A lil harder and you are right with him.

v/one

please return the favor on my battle please.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133090

Thanks