hmm..
Finish:i liked the flow you had it was a nice lil flow... but you self glorified more than you threw punches, which is not the best idea to do in a battle.. great for cyphers and stuff, but doesent get the job done in battles..structured was hurting a lil bit, decent.
one:the multies are there in your verse and are working well for it.. flow was good... multies were there.. punches were on point.. really good good verse i thought... keep up the nice work..structure was nice..
v/one
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