This wasnt too bad of a battle.

flow2crazy im not sure why you were using such generic rhymes, lie, eye, tie. At the end you rhymed with down twice also. Work on the rhyming scheme a little bit better, and your vocab it would help your rhymes a lot. The flow of it all was good, and it had good structure though.

Datruth I felt you had a stronger vocab, I was feelin your punches a lot more. Some of the punches coulda been better, Ive seen you use better ones. The flow was good, I seen you used more multis than you normally do.

I just think Datruth was hittin harder on this one.

v/Datruth