ok,,, 10-15 lines
no feeding off my verse,,,
no crew votes or votes from kids under 15....

ok check in...

Heres my check in but whens the spits due?

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

35 min.. i'm starting now

If you were Jerry Rice you couldn't catch the lyrics that I send ta you/
This is like Mortal Kombat, I even got niggas screamin "Finish you!?/
i'll limit you, you have no style, you're record shows it, you're fuckin O and 2/
You are like a dead man in Rigamortis, there's absolutley no flow in you (blood flow)/
i'm showin you skill, and if you could see it from my angle/
then you'd take your busted flow and go swim in the Bermuda Triangle/
I hate you, your rhymes just get wrinkled like old age, while I ripen/
coz man, your damn style changes more than gas station prices/
you ain't that nice kid, and you even wanna be me, I just let it be known/
it's like we're new born twins and I was born first, I'm ahead of this clone/
you'll get my name etched in your bones, your not good, try again next year/
you think that your flow sounds ill? you must not hearin yo self like Vango's left ear/
this the west her, and I came tp burn you and watch your soul come out the ash/
Yo whole rap style is "garbage", so I just had to take out the trash/

at the end, I meant, this is the west "here".........

dis nigga says hes the truth, but its all a lie
when hes in da booth, the sound makes me wanna die
dis boy looks funny, like hes got a lazy eye
his words r in pieces, held togetha by a twisty tie
ur not sposed 2 b in dis game witout skillz
but this nigga still think he can get record dealz
i only battle him for some cheap thrillz
the only way he'll have a hit is jumpin off 9 story windosills
you know me im the talk of the town
my ill style is brand new n already world renown
but this boy talked so much shit his teeth got stained brown
he aint see my right hook comin to knock him down
dis nigga fell to the ground witout a sound
he shoulda stayed home n mailed me the crown
Im in the midwest n im holdin it down

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

Votes?

not a bad battle

Some of both of your lines were stretched... flow2's flow fell off quite a bit, i wasnt really feelin his punches.. pretty played..

plus i hate gangsta raps.. shows bad taste.. why talk about record deals and niggas, this is the net man in case you havent noticed.. im white, and im about 99% sure that you are too.. so stop frontin... and what are you in the midwest of?? nothing.. same with datruth talkin bout the west... you heard snoop or whoever sayin it and thought it was cool....... dont mean to preach, but youll never get anywhere if someone didnt tell you..

but anyway, dont mind me.. that shit just annoys me...truth's punches hit harder i thought.. better vocab n knowledge.. more complex flow.. so he took it

v/ daTruth

lol.. this probly wasnt much of a favour.. lol.. what with rippin into you bout gangsta raps.. but could you return it?? need votes on my battle with "sixx da finish", its in my sig

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uppin..

This wasnt too bad of a battle.

flow2crazy im not sure why you were using such generic rhymes, lie, eye, tie. At the end you rhymed with down twice also. Work on the rhyming scheme a little bit better, and your vocab it would help your rhymes a lot. The flow of it all was good, and it had good structure though.

Datruth I felt you had a stronger vocab, I was feelin your punches a lot more. Some of the punches coulda been better, Ive seen you use better ones. The flow was good, I seen you used more multis than you normally do.

I just think Datruth was hittin harder on this one.

v/Datruth

uppinf fa votes.........

hmmmmm
actually
Strucutre~Flow
Vocab~DA
Pnuches~Da
Metas~Da
Everyhting else~Da

v/ Da he came hard nice opner like the opener its coo......

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upping again...... Vote, I'll return the favor, I promise.....

up up and away