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Old 07-02-04, 06:04 PM   #7
roop
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i'll make you see more *pane than a window cuz im rough
the truth is that you are like straws cuz you suck
makes no sense

i'll shot you like im the washington area sniper
you couldnt kick shit playin soccer with a diaper
first line is good but wtf is the next line

you have no beat so you cant be two steppin
if youre the answer it mustve been a stupid question
weak punch but ok

i've had enough with this freestyle so fuck it
ima split you in half like your a school budget
really bad

i help different places cuz im a true patriot
kid youre depriving a village of its idiot
alrite

go back to your day job and keep takin out trash
i'll call you a donkey cuz you look like an ass
terrible closer

dat was verse bad

Ill spit on point to stab ya and leave ya with internal battle scars
ya fear me while ya trapped in my cell cuz ya cant escape my bars
good opener for a noob but a little stretched if u had multies in there it woul've been pimp

this 1 0n 1 beef ya "fail" so dont try to "pass" this test
Ill be stickin to this vicious victory like gum under desk
doesnt make much sense but it rhymes

i think ya gettin out of line like drunk cats tryin to walk straight
ya off target ya stats are "low" and ya losin meters at a "high" rate
stretched out, but it rhymes

ya flows are so diluted ya peeps disowned ya and left ya to stray
they reek so bad like bad breath ya whole life startin to decay
alrite

beatin me ya mentally ill in the head ya demented n derranged
ya punches are more broke than a hobo lookin for loose change
good punch

i dont waiste time to murder you while you over loafed
like the computer im killin ya on ya "micro" "soft"
a pun, wow, i didnt like it so bad closer


Noob Battle, no disrespect. But i have to go with K cuz he had some flow and 2 ok punches. Just elevate guys.


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Return da favor, betwen my battle vs plustwo, links in da sig
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