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i'll make you see more *pane than a window cuz im rough
the truth is that you are like straws cuz you suck

i'll shot you like im the washington area sniper
you couldnt kick shit playin soccer with a diaper

you have no beat so you cant be two steppin
if youre the answer it mustve been a stupid question

i've had enough with this freestyle so fuck it
ima split you in half like your a school budget

i help different places cuz im a true patriot
kid youre depriving a village of its idiot

go back to your day job and keep takin out trash
i'll call you a donkey cuz you look like an ass

*pane is a glass on the window but it also sounds like pain

checkin in.............................................

Ill spit on point to stab ya and leave ya with internal battle scars
ya fear me while ya trapped in my cell cuz ya cant escape my bars
this 1 0n 1 beef ya "fail" so dont try to "pass" this test
Ill be stickin to this vicious victory like gum under desk
i think ya gettin out of line like drunk cats tryin to walk straight
ya off target ya stats are "low" and ya losin meters at a "high" rate
ya flows are so diluted ya peeps disowned ya and left ya to stray
they reek so bad like bad breath ya whole life startin to decay
beatin me ya mentally ill in the head ya demented n derranged
ya punches are more broke than a hobo lookin for loose change
i dont waiste time to murder you while you over loafed
like the computer im killin ya on ya "micro" "soft"

alright im uppinn for some more votes right now...

i'll make you see more *pane than a window cuz im rough
the truth is that you are like straws cuz you suck
makes no sense

i'll shot you like im the washington area sniper
you couldnt kick shit playin soccer with a diaper
first line is good but wtf is the next line

you have no beat so you cant be two steppin
if youre the answer it mustve been a stupid question
weak punch but ok

i've had enough with this freestyle so fuck it
ima split you in half like your a school budget
really bad

i help different places cuz im a true patriot
kid youre depriving a village of its idiot
alrite

go back to your day job and keep takin out trash
i'll call you a donkey cuz you look like an ass
terrible closer

dat was verse bad

Ill spit on point to stab ya and leave ya with internal battle scars
ya fear me while ya trapped in my cell cuz ya cant escape my bars
good opener for a noob but a little stretched if u had multies in there it woul've been pimp

this 1 0n 1 beef ya "fail" so dont try to "pass" this test
Ill be stickin to this vicious victory like gum under desk
doesnt make much sense but it rhymes

i think ya gettin out of line like drunk cats tryin to walk straight
ya off target ya stats are "low" and ya losin meters at a "high" rate
stretched out, but it rhymes

ya flows are so diluted ya peeps disowned ya and left ya to stray
they reek so bad like bad breath ya whole life startin to decay
alrite

beatin me ya mentally ill in the head ya demented n derranged
ya punches are more broke than a hobo lookin for loose change
good punch

i dont waiste time to murder you while you over loafed
like the computer im killin ya on ya "micro" "soft"
a pun, wow, i didnt like it so bad closer


Noob Battle, no disrespect. But i have to go with K cuz he had some flow and 2 ok punches. Just elevate guys.


Vote K-awdik

Return da favor, betwen my battle vs plustwo, links in da sig

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alright uppin for votes............................

uppin for votes....................................

V/ K-awdik.....

Adroit's first couple of bars were whack, and then he had a few good punches in his verse. But his opener was bad, his flow was ok, but words were corney.. his punches were ok but not consistent..


Punches: K-awdik
structure: Adroit
Flow: tie
overall.. K-awdik

oops, my bad, i meant to post a link.. could you return the favor and vote on this ?
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132827

alright uppin for votes............................

uppin for votes....................................

adroit
i'll make you see more *pane than a window cuz im rough
the truth is that you are like straws cuz you suck
doesn't make sense...the rough part. u bein rough doesn't bring pain. 1/10
i'll shot you like im the washington area sniper
you couldnt kick shit playin soccer with a diaper
kinda funny. 6/10
you have no beat so you cant be two steppin
if youre the answer it mustve been a stupid question
funny again. but simple. 5/10
i've had enough with this freestyle so fuck it
ima split you in half like your a school budget
lol.....pretty creative shit. 6/10
i help different places cuz im a true patriot
kid youre depriving a village of its idiot
dumb. 1/10
go back to your day job and keep takin out trash
i'll call you a donkey cuz you look like an ass
4 yr old shit. 1/10
I can't help but think this wasn't all you. You had sparks' of wordplay an great meti4's and then complete idiot moment's. I'm a little unsure of the fact that all of this is infact you.
20/60

K-awdik
Ill spit on point to stab ya and leave ya with internal battle scars
ya fear me while ya trapped in my cell cuz ya cant escape my bars
really nice shit. great wordplay. 8/10
this 1 0n 1 beef ya "fail" so dont try to "pass" this test
Ill be stickin to this vicious victory like gum under desk
Ok metiphore. 4/10
i think ya gettin out of line like drunk cats tryin to walk straight
ya off target ya stats are "low" and ya losin meters at a "high" rate
seem'd boring. filler'ish 3/10
ya flows are so diluted ya peeps disowned ya and left ya to stray
they reek so bad like bad breath ya whole life startin to decay
ehh. 3/10
beatin me ya mentally ill in the head ya demented n derranged
ya punches are more broke than a hobo lookin for loose change
it's ok. jus dont see ne spark's. 4/10
i dont waiste time to murder you while you over loafed
like the computer im killin ya on ya "micro" "soft"
played as much as u can play. 1/10
Not much to say.Same deal as Adroit. All I can say is spit like you did in your first bar all the time. An you'll win alot more than you'll lose. Nice Drop. Sorta. No Hate.
23/60

Vote/K-awdik

Hit up the battle's in my sig wit honest votes'.Thanks.

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