WARNING: this vote is not a reflection of how good you are
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but a reflection of how good you were to the other battle
Malefic- nice opener 7/10
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sum one help this bitch, she's lost. she needs a net guide-
tryna walk in my world? your like your avi. Outside-
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good r/s and w/p 6/10
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Trick don't make me cry....I'll leave your organ's out dried.
Thinkin you win....right...girl you must be watchin Sci-fi-
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gettin a little personal good flow so far 7/10
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Or countin dick-ride's...You thinkin your name sounds tight..
Harmfull not quite....not even your cunt put's up a fight-
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little personal 6/10
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Aint that right? ur come'in late, jus like your check in-
If I can re-ckon. your words like your rapperz' no weapon-
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good closer vocab w/p 7/10
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Last bar to rip you. I'll make it quite hospitable....
I'll lay u out like Son of Sam. An make your status critical-
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Inimical Female-
not a very good opener short 1st stretch 2nd bad w/p 3/10
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Malefic you aint gonna win
You couldnt spit for shit if you was a stupid kid chewin tobacco
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this was a good atempt at a punch bad w/p 4/10
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I'll leave your ass pointing home like the extraterrestrial(ET)
you just wanna go home cuz im in control
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this was ok w/p pitty this lines out here by itself 3/10
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Im a murderous verbalist my words are like fists
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this was ok rhyming but it could be set up a bit better 4/10
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so I insist you dont mess wit me
cuz I'll smoke your ass like rolled weed
have you bowing to my knees like the mad cow disease
Bitch its over, please.
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overall- malefic... you had a better rhyme scheme and more consistent flow
...good battle
vote- malefic