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Old 07-03-04, 07:57 PM   #28
Orijinal
Bitches I've Sonned
 
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
IP:

think your Jordan and black...cause you rhyme about being shot...
like him you can retire and comeback but nobody'd notcie...cause you still wouldnt be hot...^^^his sig
Good opener..nice punch 7.5/10
you can keep your title of president cause to you i am a God...
and you suck my dick like the presidential scandal... all your head does is nod...
lmao, i like that.."and you suck my dick like the presidential scandal... all your head does is nod..." nice..8.5/10
you challenged my weak crew thinkin youll win...its your simple herb logic...
your entire Klass is only Sick...cause they caught herpes ridin DON's dick...^^^look at his sig again klass sicks
Nah, weak..weak punch..coulda done betta off the name 'klas sicks" 5/10
i bomb this capitol like baghdad...leave you hidin in a hole and lonely...
everything you say...is more played than my stereo from SONY...
..weak damn..uh oh..the rest betta be nice..this was weak 4.5/10
when you said you'll win...you werent aware of what you were STATEing...
cause your Bush and I'm Kerry...Im bout to win this approval rating...
..weak..your done with the presidential shit..wack closer.. 5/10

comments: You were blazin hot when you was spittin' in the beginnin..then i kept on readin..ugly punchlines..ugly closer..you can say half was hot half was ass..

averaged: 6.1

Spit-Flames, Rip-Lames, Mer-Kin Don, From Dust Till-Dawn...........
Leave you dead on my front lawn, your rap status Is similar To Pawns......
Nice opener aswell..7.5/10
your Highly Unknown, wore a du-rag and still couldn't get "waves".....
Murder You, Leave your cascatte next to your great grandma's Grave.......
Wack..I liked the first part then U fucked up at the second 5/10
Kid Spits Wackness, Like Shaq's 3's you Need More Practice........
You Don't win, everything was given to you like a hollywood actress.......
The first line is played, the second line is iight 6/10
Blast-Nines, You Don't-shine, Like Black lights..........
Merk this kid quickly, have him on the First Flight.........
Wack..ain't like it..weak 5/10
Blast My Gats Right Through Your Grandma's Rockin' Chair.........
Through your Moms Apron, And it aint Stoppin There.......
Wack closer..ah man...5.5/10

comments: damn man..state i thought u had this battle..u can give any excuse you want but still..people can drop verses in 10 mins..i mean..u cant give any excuses on battles it just makes your shit look worse.

averaged: 5.8

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133085
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