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Old 07-03-04, 09:06 PM   #11
QBsmasher
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Malefic I was feeling your style man, you had some nice personals, good flow and structure. The one about dick-ride that was syck, had a double meaning on it. Even was some multis in the verse, I was really feelin it.

Inimical - Your structure was all over the place, which usually hurts your flow, sometimes the structure can be off but syllables are on and flow is good. I just wasnt seeing either one, you did use a few multis in a couple lines, but they werent hittin for anything. Your punches just werent there, come harder next time.

v/Malefic