ok...

winc.not great......sum ok punches....ova than that basic structure..up vocab/creativity...ok flow..

star...no punches..ok rhyme scheme....i know u betya than that..u jus came half assed coz u thought it woz gonna b easy
it wasnt a strong battle verse....
dnt take nuttin 4 granted n always cum hard..(ive bin a victim of this maself..)

ima hve to vote winc...cos he tried n had the beta punches

both yall return an honest vote...
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