opener: was nice u came out good, ur simile was nice ass well
structure: structure was terrible....LOL....u juss strecthed it out..round here peeps dont like dat stuff
vocab:iz alright u seem to know wat ur talking about..
flow:Came together alright could have been better if u added multies
closure:waz funny "Draft Night" LOL...

daz my rating....im out ~~1~~