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07-09-04, 12:16 AM | #1 | |||||
I haven't posted yet...
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New SKool General/Rookie Of da Year is HERE!!!!!
IP: 918B 403E
Fukk bein a free agent/ no time to be Patient/cuz my bullets a make u slim like clay aiken/so dun fuk around homes respect me its reel/if not get popped like extasy pills/Tha type to leave u wobblin wit ya teeth missin/My flow is a gun shootin verbal ammunition/NIggaz try get me late cmoe n fight me early/So ur ass can ketch stiches like Nike Jerseys..........Its Da kidd Mouse aka M.Gatez New Skool general(Class is now in session) Tha number one free agent in da building ITS DRAFT NITE Hola at me
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07-09-04, 12:31 AM | #2 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
opener: was nice u came out good, ur simile was nice ass well
structure: structure was terrible....LOL....u juss strecthed it out..round here peeps dont like dat stuff vocab:iz alright u seem to know wat ur talking about.. flow:Came together alright could have been better if u added multies closure:waz funny "Draft Night" LOL... daz my rating....im out ~~1~~ |
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