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Old 07-09-04, 08:17 PM   #14
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest

first off the hole shit was simple as hell and should not be a verse. second punches was weak as hell and personals...damn they suck... stop trying... i see y you retired.


By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside

i don't no about anyone else but i liked it nice flow (though style was bad{i recommand puting .'s or /'s after ever rhyme}) personals and punches were alot better (even though you had to read a hole bunch of shit understand some of them). plus your was more complex.

i give this battle to you: daclassic



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