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atlas the vagabond
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IP:
nice drops from both of you, i haven't seen a truley grimey set of verses in a second. so props to the utmost on that alone. but here's the judgement
supercilious-very gutter, i liked it a lot. what stuck out to me is this line
i been to the devil and back and hells hot
that line was great, and it just lead in to greater lines lines. like the standout of the whole verse-
and my shells hot...i make ya moms throwback bottom bells rock
That shit was NICE! throwback bottom bells, that's hot, i wouldn't be surprised if some didn't get it though, cuz i didn't at first. then i put it together. bottom bells=bell bottoms, throw back bell bottoms. HOT
killah-nice opener.
If i see this nigga and he a block away
Im have his bitch ass doing tha rock away
i definately like the swagger about the line.
the problem is that because of the hot line it had me expecting more, and i'm afraid for the rest of the verse, you didn't deliver hard enough. over all it was a decent verse just not good enough to get over. props though.
v=supercilious
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