DC:

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
-structure was off, but punch was understood...opener:6/10
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
-nice punch, good personal...wordplay was good
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
-haha, my favorite line...great punch with great comedy
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
-haha, another comedy line, good punch, nice vocab
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
-nice structure, good meta, nice wordplay....closure: 8/10

Comments:you had stretched lines, but you had great punches, great style...i was a actually laughing during some of your lines, comedy is always good, you had great wordplay and you had original vocab, nice verse...opener was decent but closure was good.....//.....8.7/10


Shadow:

Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
-nice opener, but ance is just an asumption. great structure....opener:7/10
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
-good punch, lacked vocab or word play
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
-good good, punch was also understood, still needs word play
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
-cussing brings this line down, newbs cuss not vets
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
-nice meta, aight wordplay....closure:6/10

Comments:you had great stucture throught the whole verse, but you lacked word play which brought down your creativity points, you had many landed punches, i didnt see any filler really, opener was good, closure was decent.....//......8.3/10


vote: DaClassic

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