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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
ready had less filler in his verse. but some of his lines didnt make sence, just small things like when he said hell defeat him then beat him, sort of just rhyming for the sake of rhyming. some of ya punches were pretty weak too, the drop the soap rhyme was a good closer (dunno if it was bittin or not so i gotta give him the benefit of the doubt) X factor.., your verse didnt make sence at times either bro like the proof line.... the end line would be good, but a word of advice bro, if ya gonna accuse someone of biting, u gotta give a link 2 where they bit from or sumthin....
im gonna give it 2 ready, it was still pretty weak at times, but it was 'just' enough 2 beat X...
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