aight kid u no the rules 10-20 lines each 1 round and i go first. here goes.

I dont throw slugs i throw shells so u could catch da drama,
steal ya ladie friend, u aint got one? den i snatch ya momma//
when i deceit u, I'll defeat u, den beat you//
i click-clack and leave ya fo-head see-through//
fuck rewindin ya shit, i'll hit eject and think reflection//
den I replay da tape in slo-mo when i break ya midsection//
facin me? advisors say "no no no" like Jae Mills//
infected wit a terminal sickness, dats why i stay ill//
i pay my dues and bills, while dis nigga X is in debt//
u gotta vest? den Ready use a Teck n put a hole in ya neck//
u should just knock on wood, cuz u need all da luck//
if im heated AND STRAPPED...u should just crawl or duck//
u prolly write ya shit, or get ya wack rhymes by purchase//
wen u spit u always clownin, so u belong in da circus
for ya chances in da game son, ya lifestyles curtains//
u da typa nigga go tah jail and drop da soap.....ON PURPOSE//

what happened did u chicken out. well if u did i can understand y. cmon puzzy drop sumthin.

you bit that last line bitch and just reworded it some more//
shit you say im in debt you prolly buy your clothes at the dollar store//
ohh well one weak ass line you drop wont hurt me//
your gay little bitch you probably got genital herpes//
you made a big mistake by choosin to battle me kid//
keep messin around ill send ya to meet big pun, pac and big//
you beatin me in a battle what the hell were you smokin//
if i was a clown then id be kiddin but i aint fuckin jokin//
dont try to act all hard soft bitch so just stop//
i am & i got more "Proof" than the album "i miss the hip hop shop"<proof's solo album>
youll never fire a gun cuz your prolly a soft punk bitch//
but i got shit that'll leave you wit somethin worse than the 7-year-itch//
this aint a game this rap shit is a part of me//
my punches are so sharp theyll tear open your flesh and cut out your arteries//
you cant match my aggressive style//
man you probably mad cuz your dick is smaller than a newborn child's//
it aint over yet im gonna end it on a good note//
next time you decide to bite shit at least put it in quotes//

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sorry kid but i didint bite that line. but on a diff note good flow i like it. how bout mine?

you got some hard hittin shit but if you listen to one of shiveres freestyle friday verses he says somethin like that but its all good

alright this is gonna be a hard decision. Both drops was hot, I dont know if you was bitin ready but it was hot, anyway my vote goes for Ready


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ready had less filler in his verse. but some of his lines didnt make sence, just small things like when he said hell defeat him then beat him, sort of just rhyming for the sake of rhyming. some of ya punches were pretty weak too, the drop the soap rhyme was a good closer (dunno if it was bittin or not so i gotta give him the benefit of the doubt) X factor.., your verse didnt make sence at times either bro like the proof line.... the end line would be good, but a word of advice bro, if ya gonna accuse someone of biting, u gotta give a link 2 where they bit from or sumthin....

im gonna give it 2 ready, it was still pretty weak at times, but it was 'just' enough 2 beat X...

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props to both battlyst, good entertainment. but here's the verdict.

ready-nice structure and flow, i particularly liked these lines.

fuck rewindin ya shit, i'll hit eject and think reflection//
den I replay da tape in slo-mo when i break ya midsection//
facin me? advisors say "no no no" like Jae Mills//

nice way to connect. is ''think reflection'' and ''facin me'' also connected. Because i was wondering why you said, and think reflection. So i thought facin me, was a connection to ''and think reflection'' as well as the line it's already in. if so, that's really hot.

anyway, the problem that we did have here, is that you had some decent punches, but some useless fillers too. The deceive, defeat, beat you one. stuff like that is unneeded in a battle. You can't have open space in a verse(fillers) you gotta keep your crowd's attention.

as for the drop the soap line on purpose, it's not a bitten line, it's just something that's been said over a million times when you are clowning somebody, or something, "Your ass would drop the soap on purpose." yes i have heard people battle me and use that line, it's a common diss. which is unnacceptable in a verse, and certainly not an ender. but i can't call it a bite though. overall, decent verse.

x factor-i liked the fact that you made light of the error of his last line, in both the start and the finish of your verse. Saying what everybody would've thought, earns you a strong plus. but, you had a lot of disses that were A. barely disses B. Not punchlined, or creative. it's like it's not about what you say, it's how you say it. You can't just say, i wear diamonds on my neck, you gotta say, I rock ice that'll bring the north pole to the desert. Everything is about description and whit, and that's how you catch listeners ears.
overall i think that Ready got this one, but keep elevating.

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