Scriptive
ok this is it, your going to get merked smokescreen,
notice his age is undisclosed, it's because he's thirteen,
-not a good personal
this guy gets his name of poke'mon what a fool,
he's a choke artist, someone send him to rap school,
-bad punch
plus one to your beaten record, that makes it two,
i don't know why your on this site, you still wear baby shoes,
-if hes 13 how is he wearin baby shoes
your probably a white boy with a laptop, thinkin you a thug,
while your mum, is in the kitchen popping prescription drugs,
-whats wrong wit a laptop and the last line is played
slimey and smell imma squash this guy like a slug,
his laptop has broken down, ive just pulled the plug,
-really bad punch not all cats squash slugs

Smokescreen
Like Raiden, I’m sendin’ you “flows” of an electricity shock
Scriptive wouldn’t be a “Icon” if you was on a computer “desk~top
-that was pretty good punch
You covered in blackness “Script” you lack the realness so practice
In-fact-this nigga excels in one skill and that’s wackness
-need to word it better
Scriptive battles SMOKE dogg what the hell are you thinkin’
You couldn’t “Navigate” a win if you was drivin’ a “Lincoln”
-bad punch
Don’t you know that stealin is wrong you’ll be locked up doing some time
If you did then why you stealin Eminem’s mom’s prescription drug lines
-good personal
I’ll put a stop to you like a period at the end of a phrase
You’ll think its “The Day After Tomorrow” when you get hit wit this wave
-not a good punch

overall smokescreen won this for better structure,sense,punches and better personal
vote-Smokescreen