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Old 07-17-04, 09:56 PM   #9
E Looch
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hit that up or i will kill u

dc

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
HAD MULTIES FLOW WAS CHOPPY PUNCH WAS PRETTY AVERAGE... DECENT BARS

Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
STOP WITH THE COMAS FIRST LINE WASNTWORDED RIGHT SOUNDED FORCED 2ND LINE PRETTY NICE WORDPLAY DECENT PUNCH

A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
NICE BARS RIGHT HERE TIGHT WORDPLAY IN THE 2nd LINE TIGHT PUNCH HERE

The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
NICE BARS AGAIN DONT THINK PEOPLE GONNA CATCH THE PUNCH '"BEHIND OTHERS" AN HIS NAME SHADOWS EDGE DONT KNOW IF U REALIZED THAT BUT SHIT WAS NICE AN PUNCH WAS GOOD

Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
NICE FIRST LINE GOOD WORDPLAY OFF HIS NAME PUNCH WAS PRETTY NICE I CAUGHT IT NICE BARS AGAIN HERE

OVERALL- NICE VERSE HAD A BUNCH OF PERSONALS NICE WORDPLAY IN A BUNCH OF LINES HAD MULTIES YADA YADA YADA THINK YA VERSE GOT BETTER AS IT WENT ON MADE UP FOR THE SOFT PUNCHS IN THE BEGINNING TIGHT VERSE AN GOOD USUAGE OFF HIS NAME

SE
Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
KINDA FUNNY BUT DIDNT THINK THE PUNCH HIT TO HARD

It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
NICE BARS HERE GOOD PUNCH AN DECENT PERSONAL

We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
FIRST LINE HALF GLORIFICATION DECENT SET UP NICE WORDPLAY IN 2ND LINE PUNCH WAS PRETTY AVERAGE NOT THAT HARD HITTIN TO ME

My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
AGAIN HALF GLORIFICATION IN 1ST LINE DECENT WORDPLAY IN 2ND LINE DIDNT FEAL THE PUNCH AGAIN ON THESE LINES

no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
DAMN SHADOW AGAIN GLORIFICATION MOST I SEEN IN YOUR VERSES BUT THE 2ND LINE WAS ILL WOW REAL SICK SHIT NICE WORDPLAY PRETTY NICE PUNCH BUT KILLED IT WITH THE WORDPLAY ON THAT SHIT

OVERALL-HAD SOME PERSONALS AS WELL NICE WORDPLAY TO THAT PUJOLES LINE WAS DOPE HAD BETTER RHYME SCHEME AND FLOW I THOUGHT PUNCHS WHERE AROUND AVERAGE THINK U PUT TO MUCH GLORIFICATION IN THE VERSE NICE STRUCTURE THOUGH

VOTE DACLASSIC

THOUGHT HE HAD BETTER PUNCHS AN CONSTENT PERSONALS IF U CATCH EM GOOD BATTLE BY BOTH
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