I thought this was a great piece, it is a poem and i think it is a great song also, you have a very strong vocabulary and it shows, your use of words helped me to visualize a lot of the images that you were trying to portray, and it flowed beautifully........keep it up liquor....
plz drop some honest feedback on my pieces, (where???) and (UNTITLED) thanx

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