i feel bad xxxtasy but they rite u need 2 practice more on ur rhymes when u write rhymes they supposed 2 rhyme dis int japenese poetry where shit dont have 2 rhyme its music n music rhymes i see ima have 2 help u out on ur multis n punches big time but dont worry jus listen 2 ur teacher love u gurl but dis nigga definately again like da las 1 ate u alive good flows 2 both though practice makes perfect

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