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Old 07-18-04, 11:58 PM   #11
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This battle was a close battle i think strype won though

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Strype- your personals in this battle were killin it one whole line just smashed his name and that was tha highlight of your verse (to me)"but Da Truth is I got Two Nines.. Bullets Marked wit Ya Name and so go'head n tell em your name.. how you Ran-from-me FIVE Times" pesonals were hott your punches hit hard as well i like tha ja rule punch overall ya verse was on point 7/10

datruth29-wanst feelin ya opener all that much but your second line made up for it hella lot "tha same spaz four times" LOL "He talks out his ass, I should give em shit to Feed His Asshole N I read yo basic rhyme scheme, i'll tell Dr. Suess U Need A BAttle" nice punch prolly one of tha best in your verse the rest werent as stopng as strypes but u tried to come hard

both-should use more word play and multies yall structure was both allright and both floed well but

vote-Strype
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