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Old 07-20-04, 11:12 PM   #13
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V/DaTruth29 - Harder hitting punches. No verse was that good though.

DaTruth - Some of your punches hit soft and some of them were decent. No real hard punches there. No personals (made up some). Flow was okay. I saw some decent wordplay like the opener and the 'sense' line.

Lil-Trip - Lines were stretched, some multies, but it still was hard to read. Punches hit softly. Some shit didn't make sense... (Trip will always Spit Hotter, cus' a father cant be beaten by his daughter. WTF???)
Not much quotable personals either (what the hell is with the 'reciever' thing?). Attempted wordplay which was good, but wasn't really feeling your verse man.

Returning the favor. Poll vote on mines please. I'll poll vote on yours after hitting 20 posts.
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