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07-20-04, 08:44 PM

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Lil-trip Vs. Datruth29: Vote Man

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10 Lines
No Crew.. D/r
Due In 40 Min..

07-20-04, 08:46 PM

Lil-trip

Middle Weight

aight...

IP: C359 7D74

Quote:

Originally Posted by Datruth29

10 Lines
No Crew.. D/r
Due In 40 Min..

"Checked-in"

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07-20-04, 08:58 PM

MARVOLoUsJ1009

STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!

From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!

IP: C1DA C961

truth im callin u out fukkin fagget.....so hurry up and go write ya lil 40 minutes 10 lines lmaooo

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07-20-04, 09:06 PM

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My Game is Gory, u tell fairy tales like Aesop n Son's Ancient Stories
so i'm "burning" u to a Denzel movie so u'll go out in a "Blaze Of Glory"
don't Tell Me yo Crews Hot, i'll hit u in the Belly with Two Glocks
You Vs. ME? that's like comparing Nelly Wit Tupac
You Lick The Assholes, I'm a Def (deaf) "Artist" like Vincient Vango
For me it makes dollars to war, for u it don't make Sense To Battle
Mercenary, I Heard U Scary so I run u over like Road Kill
No Skills to pay the Bills, good thing he lives wit mom n has No Bills
Lil trip? I'll nudor you and make trip over yo own Lil Dick
In every line you fall off more man, "Get A Grip"

07-20-04, 09:08 PM

SONIC

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Every bar had a punch, even the last one.. if you don't get it, just ask me..

07-20-04, 09:19 PM

Lil-trip

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"Truthfully" 29, your mom leaves her condoms UnTraceable n Soddered
Dont leave that bitch bothered, cus you wonderin whos your real father
Trip will always Spit Hotter, cus' a father cant be beaten by his daughter
Ur shit cant stick if it was T-shirt thats Holtered, dippin once n it falters
T-R-I-P, is the Main Crossreference when DaTruth is Reppin N lookin up "G"
Truths a Faggat you see, denies being able to "Recieve" But Delivers Anally a Clear STD
Follow the "White-Line" Pussy, be fucked off n O of it n you think you can Shook Me
Maybe will jus sell yo "Noo-kie", cus I wont Listen if You Crowned me "King" sayin "Rook-Me"
Your battlin a Panther Leader, who didnt get this far by bein You but Bein Me n Meaner
sorry Kanye his soul is weaker, didnt make a Atheist but a "Recieiver" a "Believer"...

~Holla Lil Trip

07-20-04, 09:23 PM

Lil-trip

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uppin for votes people, honest votes wit some honest luv, holla back

07-20-04, 09:42 PM

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yea.. uppin

07-20-04, 10:08 PM

*The~Star*

.:So~So~Good:.

From: STL:314

IP: 75B6 C69F

Vote=DaTruth

He got my vote because he had better flow and better punches,which is very important in a battle.Lil Trip had no flow and had bad struture.Trip also had weak punches,which got him a lost for lack of punches and flow.So DaTruth got my vote for better punches and Flow. \/Holla

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07-20-04, 10:20 PM

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Lil-trip

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Originally Posted by *The~Star*

lol this bitch is back around again, fo real Star if your gonna make a vote, even if your jus gonna come in here frontin sayin nothin is there then rep the other cats so it looks completly one sided cus you got beef, take it somewhere else..

This "Is" gonna be a good battle cus we both brought it, but sayin there was "No" Flow, Bad Structure when shit was placed fine, at least be realistic..

No rules said no "Hate" votes so ima let that one slide, do us all a favor tho Star n rep properly n go hit up a pair of shorts, do the splits, n get stuck to the floor n when your done, see if you can make a spit "Stick" off the shit you let off cus its the only way shit would ever get stuck, dumbass..

Anyways for everyone else, keep the votes rollin in, peace...

07-20-04, 10:25 PM

#11

*The~Star*

.:So~So~Good:.

From: STL:314

IP: 75B6 C69F

You know Lil Trip when I voted for this,I already knew you was gone bring this shit about me hating when its not like that at all.I feel you had bad flow & structure like you feel that I'm hating.Its my Opinion...I have one,you have one.

I'm honest when it comes to voting so chill out with that bullshit ok

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07-20-04, 11:10 PM

#12

DeHotBwoy

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From: Dub-Town

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Dont Take this as hate Lil-Trip that shit was fuckin Werid as hell im sorry but u can't catch a win wit that no Diss-Respect but u need to elavate on Personal-Punches Packed = in 1 then u have good stuff u where out of line Strected 1s to

daTruth29 no hate niether but u had some good no needers and 2 Many Fillers thatz Bad need to improve on makeing more sence insted of useing fillerz than ur rhymez punches personals come out better i mess up like that 1 in a while but u got this by far on my watch alot

Vote/Datruh

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07-20-04, 11:12 PM

#13

Percept Shun

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V/DaTruth29 - Harder hitting punches. No verse was that good though.

DaTruth - Some of your punches hit soft and some of them were decent. No real hard punches there. No personals (made up some). Flow was okay. I saw some decent wordplay like the opener and the 'sense' line.

Lil-Trip - Lines were stretched, some multies, but it still was hard to read. Punches hit softly. Some shit didn't make sense... (Trip will always Spit Hotter, cus' a father cant be beaten by his daughter. WTF???)
Not much quotable personals either (what the hell is with the 'reciever' thing?). Attempted wordplay which was good, but wasn't really feeling your verse man.

Returning the favor. Poll vote on mines please. I'll poll vote on yours after hitting 20 posts.

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07-20-04, 11:15 PM

#14

*The~Star*

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From: STL:314

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Sorry to interrupt,but I'm not the only one Lil Trip

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07-20-04, 11:22 PM

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My vote goes to DaTruth, although I had a hard time voting for him because of his elementary rhymes..

DaTruth had harder hits, better wordplay, and better structure. I liked the "Blaze of Glory" punch, that was a nice opener.

Lil-Trip, I had trouble flowing that in my head, but maybe you had some weird ass flow that I couldn't think of. Some of that was sacrificial rhyming, like the father daughter thing... Perhaps you should explain that. You did have some good wordplay, but not enough to take my vote.

V/ DaTruth29

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