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Old 07-20-04, 11:22 PM   #15
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My vote goes to DaTruth, although I had a hard time voting for him because of his elementary rhymes..

DaTruth had harder hits, better wordplay, and better structure. I liked the "Blaze of Glory" punch, that was a nice opener.

Lil-Trip, I had trouble flowing that in my head, but maybe you had some weird ass flow that I couldn't think of. Some of that was sacrificial rhyming, like the father daughter thing... Perhaps you should explain that. You did have some good wordplay, but not enough to take my vote.

V/ DaTruth29
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