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Old 07-21-04, 07:25 AM   #14
GrEnAdE
Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 133
ok

IP:

im coming for the win this is gunna be all a blur..
.....................................i'm already lost
cuz im scrolling a half page down his signature...
^weak personal...cudve had beta setup
this herb thought i was new so he accepted to battle..
.......................................i was 11-3 on orginal
thinkin hes ghetto wit Tupac, redneck raisin cattle....
^wack...2nd line is herbish...it dnt make sense
im spittin first so this herb cant feed anything off my verse
...............................................whe n this kid spits
.....................he'll have Elvis Presley rollin in his herse
^herse lines real played..also it didnt make sense..
if u spit first..surely he can feed??


This cat need ta get wid the present cos he stuck in the past
dont mean ta make u cry but the worse game console is the dreamcast
^at first i woz like wtf?..but yeh that woz aiight rippin on dreamcast
Am a cast ma self in ur dreams n kill u wid this beat
like freddy changed his name ta young-thug on r.b street
^hmm not feelin this...ok concept though
This aint topical but we all feel sorry fo ya at this time
cos ur structures wack n u aint even used one punchline
^wack...but it is personal and true..so yeh its aiight
am a leave u naked n revealed for all ta see
leave ur flows cut apart like a gave u open hart surgery
^played
Your verse is wack u couldnt shine wid a thousand candles
u just wack tryna slit ur wrist wit knife handles
^ok closer

overall vote young thug,harder punches

meta tryed to make his look gud wit structure but his punches sucked bad

vote-thug