i dunno bouut ur whole battle ish i havent read n e thing but dis but if these rhymes n e thing like ur battles u need as much help on battlin as i need on makin hooks lol....but yo shit was nice funny though coulda been a lil long n no one really likes sum1 wit 2 much pride n ya self jus spit real shit n tha people will feel it ayt 1 luv peace

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