hattrick:structure was just barely ok and the personals were good too. i really like the punchlines cuz they hit HARD!could use work on the structure a lil bit....
bloodhound:structure was str8, used lots of personals so good job but the punchlines were just ok. work on the punchlines...

would call it a tie BUT the dennies punchline was SICK!!!
vote 2 hattrick