10-20 bars, 30 minutes to do your thing son... im waitin

its only my second battle, but im so hot that ill leave you distraught more often then not...
calling out peeps, my battle wins is one, and my rb career hasnt even begun, you got beef son-your about to be outdone...
i flow outisde of pages, so im all about the beef g
i go outside the cages, with my pump, im all about the street see, you need to see you cant deafeat me...
Them numbers in ya name spell out 420, but ill bet a pretty penny, that when it comes to ganja- you havent smoked any, with my munchies, ill eat you late at nite, like ya name was dennies...
So from the street, dog i showed you the way to flow...
You want the beef? go ahead, you a rook-joined rb 2 days ago

peace <3

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Ok.. I seen a punchline that was aight... but your word play ain't/
Talk shit and get cut into peices like a birthday cake/
You don't make street sweepers, you'll hurt they tapes, i'll pump the pump up/
This is the frontlines, these bitch MCs get cut in front of/ haha
You still chillen in the hood, while we drive on/
Smash ya head into the wall like the smiley icon/
Always spray, so wherever I been you see chalk/
My bars will murder you, so its better I win by default/
You ain't on my level, flow is better, you been this weak dawg?/
When I spray at ya legs, ya chest tense up but ya feet they c-walk/
When they hear me bark, they see sparks, consider me more/
Cuz ya'll is an important as summertime to a winter resort/haha

B-Hound

waitin for ya drop dog
(the structure may seem kind of wack peeps, but try spittin it with ya mouth)

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I went son, so its all down to the votin... im waitin on that shit

hattrick:structure was just barely ok and the personals were good too. i really like the punchlines cuz they hit HARD!could use work on the structure a lil bit....
bloodhound:structure was str8, used lots of personals so good job but the punchlines were just ok. work on the punchlines...

would call it a tie BUT the dennies punchline was SICK!!!
vote 2 hattrick

ya hatrickm took this one u need a better beginner blood other then that ur ok work on hard lines too anyways..

v/hat

return the favor YO: Plz drop an HONEST vote

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...521#post1427521

word dog, if its ya first post make 9 other ones and come back vote bro lol

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When they hear me bark, they see sparks, consider me more/
Cuz ya'll is an important as summertime to a winter resort/haha

^yo i loved that line man good shit
but boff verses was sorta wack!
yall need to expand ya shit
but basically BH took this because he had the best finisher

return the favor
delinquint vs. novakane
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I liked hattrick's verse good personals hot flow fa sho. need a better closer though.

I also liked Bloodhound's verse although the structure threw me off his flow. some good punches, no personals.

vote: hattrick.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136598

return da fava ya'll.

flipside: vote/ bloodhound

hat:

aight personals, none rele stood out....punches hit 50%....flow was decent....structure was abnormal and you have a wierd style....overall rating is. " just an average verse" if ne thing.

Blood:i hate the name but....pesronals were good, punches hit 75%....flow was alright, critique your lines and make them shorter....structure was normal....overall your rating is, "nice comedy and punches".

vote: Blood

return the favor, seriously

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135411

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quote your own damn lyrics...

upppinupppinupppinupppin for the last vote ^^^^^^^

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Hatrick:I really dont care about structure i care about verses, i liked the pretty penny verse.
Bloodhound: That verse wit the brick shit was DOPE!!!!!!

MY vote:Hatrick, I agree wit MR.BIGC, that dennies line was HOT

good looks on everyone who voted, good battle dog <3 peace

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