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Old 07-22-04, 01:53 PM   #18
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Imma give this one to hattrick for better flow.i wasnt feeling your personals much but i liked the you joined rb 2 days ago line.it was funny.you really need to work on your structure and wordplays,but apart from that,your ok!

bloodhound,you had a good verse but i didnt like the whole thing,eg:the opener,it was wack kinda.i liked your summer resort line,it cracked me up.your structure was alot better than hattricks but i wasnt feeling all of your worplays,although your birthday cake line was good.keep elevatin.

v/hattrick
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