breaking it down

hatric

its only my second battle, but im so hot that ill leave you distraught more often then not...
calling out peeps, my battle wins is one, and my rb career hasnt even begun, you got beef son-your about to be outdone...
nice opening 6/10

i flow outisde of pages, so im all about the beef g
i go outside the cages, with my pump, im all about the street see, you need to see you cant deafeat me...
basic except for the first line 6/10

Them numbers in ya name spell out 420, but ill bet a pretty penny, that when it comes to ganja- you havent smoked any, with my munchies, ill eat you late at nite, like ya name was dennies...
personal but aint great 4/10

So from the street, dog i showed you the way to flow...
You want the beef? go ahead, you a rook-joined rb 2 days ago
humm 4/10 didnt feel it

20/40
5/10
not bad not good didnt like the stucture but the flow was decent you need more personals and harder punches plus improving your vocab

4blood

Ok.. I seen a punchline that was aight... but your word play ain't/
Talk shit and get cut into peices like a birthday cake/
ok 4/10

You don't make street sweepers, you'll hurt they tapes, i'll pump the pump up/
This is the frontlines, these bitch MCs get cut in front of/ haha
decent 5/10

You still chillen in the hood, while we drive on/
Smash ya head into the wall like the smiley icon/
wack 3/10

Always spray, so wherever I been you see chalk/
My bars will murder you, so its better I win by default/
didnt feel the punch 4/10

You ain't on my level, flow is better, you been this weak dawg?/
When I spray at ya legs, ya chest tense up but ya feet they c-walk/
where is the punch 3/10

When they hear me bark, they see sparks, consider me more/
Cuz ya'll is an important as summertime to a winter resort/haha
lol made me smile best punch nice ending 7/10

26/60
4.3/10
structure was bad flow aint that great no personals man weak punches except for one
vote for hattrick for having a personal lol and trying harder with punches
vote: hattrick

with respect for both of you

yo retern the favor and vote on my battles

peace