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Old 07-22-04, 05:46 PM   #24
RapMisstress
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From: LOS ANGELES
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Eye: Verse was very strong all throughout. Punches, personals was all there. The ending took the cake though. Favorite line: got U visiting Ur verse's hospital bed while breaths it last spit


Raw Killa:Nothing was hard hittin in your verse, it didn't make me same DAMN, the structure most definitely needs some work I had to re-read a few things because the structure was messed up and the lines were stretched something terrible.


Vote: Eye
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