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Old 07-22-04, 08:26 PM   #12
Kizza
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Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin
Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon
7/10. good opener.
DV'8... hung on my Meat. so this dame Cough'n and Gaggin
O So Disgustin how i experience more head than an Asprin
8/10. good flow.
If you cant Defeat me fuck it The most Yung and Gifted Fuck it
u Mede'oKer but my Approach put me on base like Kirby Puckett
Verbal Terminal Lashins have me like Carmelo all ova ya Nugget
6/10. I liked the carmelo line, but the flow is chopy here
My Intensions ..2 Be Kicked back... in a Purple Merche'Ahlogo
DV8'Z Dame fixin me Waffles put 23 on her back like Mj in Chicago
6/10. it's a'ight. I like the MJ line, decent punch.
Hey 8 keep runnin off wit ya Soup Coolers basically keep runnin ya Lips
and Watch me send u bulletz as long as Rulers turn ya into P-Cake Mix
8/10. I hate having to fill in words on this but I like it. a bit stretched. good punch on the lips.
Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men?
No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums
5/10. stretched no punch.

40/60 overall. you could shorten it up to reduce the chopiness but otherwise a good battle verse. few ok personals.


accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so,
youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo,
9/10. nice flow, good opener.
see j im the inside like beer is in the bottle~n im really drunk,
you the outside~like a label gettin peeled~tossed in the trunk,
9/10. good line, nice punch, nice wordplay
ya crews~murder mitten~guess you advertise ya hands are cold,
this dudes a ~cowardly kitten~watch how this pussies legs fold,
9/10. nice dude.
this kid likes ta put Z's on,its his style"like he's something special",
watch me sneeze"more mentals"than his prtoduced by his pencil,
8/10. loved the wordplay, got a little shook off the flow.
in his p/m he said he was down,damn i don't wanna know that,
admittedly on his knees,keep da fetish ta yourself n da "cock"fat,
6/10. wasn't feelin this line.
honestly kid,obviously just using my name makes your verse better,
im drunk n still beat you,if half my verse was missing half the letters,
9/10. makes ammends for your spelling mistake...nice line, and a punch to boot.
3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field,
ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin on a shield
7/10. decent closer, good punch.

57/70. good battle verse. I liked ya flow and great wrdplays, nice multis. no real personal.

vote: DV8

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