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Old 07-22-04, 08:26 PM   #29
40z
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This was good. A little stretched, but for an OM, that's not a bad thing, cause u had a lot to say. Lost the capitalizing every word, doesn't really work for yas. It had some good imagery which is needed in every OM. I really felt this piece. Good wordplay. I don't know what passes for Hall of Fame round here, but the shit was dope. Keep elevatin'.

Hit the OM up in my sig. When In Rome.
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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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