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Trooper:you had good flow and structure, this time around you seem to have portrayed your punches and verse stronger here, you have gotten better, good job, overall you had the harder verse here towards your opponent.......keep it up
Auto:I liked your openening bar, it came off hard, but the verse seemed to have fallen off by the time i got to the end, overall verse was decent but u should work on structure and flow, no hate just constructive criticism, you had som enice multies tho,
work on personals both, but good job overall..........
VOTE:TROOPER

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