ATTICUS
your structure is gettin better..not much but atleast ur progessing..
this made ur flow better but becuz ur structure isnt great ur flow still
isnt up to par..i know ur capable of better..but rhyme wize multie wize emotion wize
this is a nice peice honestly dawg this is a nice peice..chourus was a little long
maybe shorten that down a bit..but other than that..this was a nice peice
real proud of ya after this one dawg nice work 8.777/10