Punches-Tie
Personals-Neither
Flow-Opt
Structure-Opt
Opener-Opt's it was more of a punch
Closer-Tie
Creativity-Tie
Originality-Opt
Overall-Optimize

keep at it you 2 just need to keep elevatin...try throwin in some more wordplay and try to tighten up ur punches and create personals.....keep at it

please leave an honest vote on this batle of mine:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137383

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