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...i'm da nicest...
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IP:
wow,this kid definitely wise beyond his years..i actually read that shit...when i'm not too into poetry,topicals etc. very descriptive,n i liked ur vocabulary...painted a nice emotional picture...
Cold sheets benieth my cold feet, I'm so old in mind cuz I have but a few short weaks
Bedtime, shit my bed cries even when I'm put back with back down as if knowing it's the end line
Amazed I'm alive cuz so many days I thought I'd died, but really not alive when ina bed for days ata time
those lines stood out to me man.........
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