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...i'm da nicest...
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IP:
my victims bruise-n-bleed, this dude steppin again is new-to-me..*
surprising, cos usually my battle raps end up as eulogies..
FLOWS NICE,BUT NO PUNCH IN THERE
mcs aint what they used-to-be.. wack kids, my dispels-are-insane..
no votes for calamity, cos bitin chinos the only way he XL's-in-this-game..
DECENT PUNCH...U MAKE UR LINES TOO LONG THOUGH
Plating my knuckles-with-brass, Ill slam clam's face-into-glass..
burn the herb, leave a match by your corpse after I drench-it-in-gas..
NOT A PUNCH,ITS A DECENT LINE,BUT NO PUNCH
attack-with-an-axe, beat ya till theres no bones-left-to-crack..
Twist up ya neck till you can count-tha amounta holes-in-ya-back..
SAME AS ABOVE,SOUNDS GOOD IF U DROPPIN AN OPEN MIC OR SOMETHING,BUT IT AINT A PUNCH
propellin-the-pain.. ya cant last, ya half assed imagery is faulty-n-merciful..
punches missin-me while my verse crunches with riveting multis-n-personals..
NOT A PUNCH TO SAY U HAVE MULTIES N PERSONALS
snubbin-n-hurtin-you..id end it, bitch, but i wanna see ya suffer-in-pain..
cos frankly this kid couldnt hold down if i handed him cuffs-n-a-chain..
NOT A HARD PUNCH
tough-in-the-brain, server minds wit clever rhymes, while loosin-my-mental..
im fuckin crazy, now y'all understand how easily i beat dudes-with-a-pencil..
HMMM....I'M NOTICING A PATTERN HERE
rip bitches fit for clips from the six clipped to my hips, flip'd hits u threw-me..
this kids dick's licked by his click, crew voters, but im a misfit-for-newbies..
NOTHIN THERE
by even challengin me again, i can see you got no more than failin-grade..
fuck a icepick, ill impale-a-blade, calams no em, but hes still trailer-made..
LOL PRETTY FUNNY
droppin his mic-fast, on the run, afraid of the shame that his types-cast..**
sorry nigga, but youre the first black man to be classified as white-trash..
U ALREADY HAD THE PREVIOUS PUNCH THAT SAID HE WAS TRAILOR MADE..ISNT THAT THE SAME THING???
no-merits,scared hairless,tho he not a bald eagle..
couldnt change identitys for the better............
............if he played the character of smeagle..
I LIKED THE BALD EAGLE,BUT I DUNNO WHO IS SMEAGLE SORRY..SHOULD HAVE EXPLAINED
he wouldnt be high among "vets" ona ladder in vietnam..
OK PUNCH
whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms..
WEAK
bomb-frauds,you gassed,i light matches to biters..
want a personal ?, you belong back in the cypher..
NOTHIN IN THERE
the only way you get a win,is the votes i give to you..
yada yada yada yada..........^and i mean that literal..
LOL I PEEPED THAT,4-5 HE WON N U WERE ONE OF THE VOTERS..NICE PERSONAL
you couldnt soar above par,if dropped from a plane..
WEAK
and you dont have g/fs,that's explained in ya name..
LMFAO..GOOD PLAY ON HIS NAME MAN
wouldnt be a starter for a team,if in a dream was expected..
even in fairy tales you get neglected, and rejected..
WEAK
ya rhymes trail away in memory,like washed out jeans..
hes addicted to herbs, just like crack house fiends..
IT'S AIGHT..DONT REALLY LIKE HERB LINES
stop and watch,maybe you can shake them newb habits..
you should be a trackstar,usin all them damn dashes..
ROFL...YEA I HATE DASHES MYSELF...THIS COULD BE WORDED BETTER,BUT GOOD CONTENT
ima save the worst for last, his lines are toys to play wit..
and like you said:
DIDNT REALLY LIKE THE CLOSING........
COMMENT.....THIS WAS VERY HARD TO JUDGE...CUZ ONE MAN HAD A LOT OF GOOD MULTIES,FLOW WAS BETTER,BUT U SPITTIN LIKE ITS FOR AN AUDIO...CUZ ALL THOSE MULTIES WOULD SOUND NICE...BUT SAYIN U GONNA LIGHT A MATCH TO HIM AINT HITTIN HARD MAN....IN AN OPEN MIC TYPE THING U'D WIN..BUT I GO BY THE RULE,PUNCHES WIN BATTLES...IN TEXT ESPECIALLY...N THIS IS A BATTLE....U HAD THAT CHINO XL PUNCH I LIKED,N THE TRAILOR TRASH LINE WAS FUNNY...BUT THEN U USED THE SAME CONTENT IN 2 OF UR BARS,ESPECIALLY UR CLOSER......THAT WAS A WRONG MOVE
CALAMITY....SEEMED LIKE A MORE BASIC VERSE,MULTI N VOCAB WISE...BUT,I'M ONE TO ALWAYS SAY..THAT SHIT ALMOST DOESNT MATTER IN A BATTLE..ITS ALL ABOUT PUNCHES,N U HAD MORE PUNCHES IN THIS BATTLE....N PERSONALS AS WELL.....THE VOTING THING,PLAYIN OFF HIS NAME N THE DASHES ...THOSE HIT THE HARDEST...U DID HAVE SOME WEAK LINES...BUT I HAD TO JUDGE BY WHO HAD MORE PUNCHES...N PERSONALS...N THAT WAS CALAMITY......ONE MAN'S VERSE DID SEEM MORE ADVANCED DUE TO THE MULTIES....BUT MY COMMENT ABOVE STANDS......
VOTE CALAMITY....NO HATE
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