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Old 07-27-04, 02:47 AM   #23
raw killa
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
 
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ayt now da first verse was okay it actually rhymed but u seriously need 2 work on punches,multis,metaphors,structure,fuck it all of it....lmmao
da second verse didnt rhyme 4 shit n these people on here got da nuts 2 say mine dont i think da hataz hatin on me need 2 get they eyes fixed id eat both these textcees 4 breakfast work on da who thing period im sry not da 1 come off mean n hatin but dat diss i quote loudly "sucked"
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