shan't be? wow, you could've took time to find a better rhymer with can't be, just on a side note. Regardless of this battle's outcome, never put ''shant'' in ya rhymes kid. Lol, i'm tryna help you out. What happenned is you had what you thought as a nice closer, or nice punchline, that would be the second sentence, you already knew what it was gonna be, you just needed a sentence before it. but don't make a throwaway line before just to make a nice ender, make an ill sentence before it.

you have just been schooled on how to rhyme by an actual emcee. not a 'netcee'.

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