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Old 07-27-04, 04:34 PM   #29
~Luciano~
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this battle was lopsided from the jump off

Adroit
you had punches but they werent hittin at all they were all simple and played out u need 2 elevate and play wit ya wordplay alot more only thing u had goin in this battle was ya structure and that was it , kinda like u didnt wanna win this at all son

K
you had some nice punches and meta's ya structure was ok and ya wordplay was good u didnt jus throw a bunch of words 2gether u used complexity and had ya form in good nice wordplay overall you won this hands down good shit kid

~~~~~my vote~~~~~~~~~K~~~~~~~~~
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